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The Hunt for the Jester - Chapter 2b

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Yes, yes, I know, more talking, more scene-setting. I promise I'll make up for it in later chapters!

Actually I radically overhauled this chapter, trying to make the dialogue flow more and cutting out some of the scene changes to make it into one flowing conversation. I'm much happier with the result, though I'm still not entirely happy with it. Still, I'm happy to leave it here for now, otherwise I'll never finish this story. Seriously, I've got to complete it this year!

I've prepared the next couple of installments, so until next time!
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Hot Mage of Raging Fire? You mean Maya from DQ4?